The idea is good, but you might want to get these...
A background. Though this is better then the classic 'sky&ground' it is still lacking try the bghq.com, the have some pretty good BG's
Fan mail? The idea is pretty good, but not many people know about your comic, and I don't think your going to get much fan mail this early.
More poses, you only put kirby in a few poses, and tat is not good. You should use many more poses, or it looks like you put in zero effort, becase though your comic is simple it dosen't look like you do much work.